The thoughts of an amateur poet…me!!

Greetings people.

I’ve finally composed a poem that actually rhymes!! Finally!! So I’d like to share it with you all. Tell me what you think. I would say there’s something wrong in this poem. Anyway it is titled: The world as I see it.

The world as I see it.

The world as I see it,
Is no more the world that I’ve know,
Many a thing plagues it,
For all I know.

The world as I see it,
War, disease, famine, corruption,
Are among many things that plagues it,
Inadvertently driving the world to the brink of self-destruction.

The world as I see it,
Its allures lost and many a people living in fear,
And many of them refuse to admit it,
And with guns and bombs they unwittingly revealed their fear.

The world as I see it,
The grasp of morality on humanity,
Is slowly but surely,
Losing its hold on many and those who once uphold it.

The world as I see it,
People with different background and living in different environment,
Is set to bring about only conflict,
As the understanding in each other is not entirely present.

The world as I see it,
For the only hope that humanity can save itself,
From their own consequences and ignorance,
Lies in we, you, I and everyone.

By yours truly,

C.W.Kit.

As you notice, the last paragraph or whatever you call it, does not rhyme. Hehe. I am out of ideas on how to make it rhyme. Anyway, feel free to send me feedback on how is it. I welcome all comments except exceptionally stupid ones. I will post my next poem soon. Just wait for it. Byee.

Greetings people.

I know that you’ve most probably heard of this line before but frankly I AM lonely. Just yesterday, I meet up with my best buddy, Siva and we chatted idly for hours. And as pathetic as I might sound, that was THE longest conversation I’ve ever had in months. The feeling was fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. To release everything that’s in my mind, issues that I’ve kept within myself, to just pour out whatever I had inside is AMAZING! A sense of relief just overwhelmed me…something I have not felt for months also. =)

I’ve not chatted with such enthusiasm yesterday for months!! In college, everybody doesn’t even bother listening to me. Actually most of them. They kept talking and talking…i dont even have the chance to talk. Yeah well, it’s better to have somebody beside me to keep me company than to be alone. However, the conversation is unequaled. They talk, I listen and listen and listen and gave very little comments. And when I thought it’s my turn to talk, they resume talking. *Sigh* And at home, my parents…never really express any interest in what I said. I dont think they do. If they do, why couldnt they listen properly?? They did not look at me or even act as if they are listening. That’s not listening. That’s pure ignorance.

The only people I feel that ever listened to me are my best friends from my secondary school. I have friends at college but no best friends. To my best friends, you all have my deepest gratitude for listening to me, for being my best friends. Thank you Siva, Sue, Chris, Bryan and of course how could I forget about you Zhe Choon? Thank you all of you. Who knows what might happen to me if I’ve no friends at all? I might be dead or worse…living just for the sake of living.

My exams are finally over!! What a relief it is to me!! I think I did not get a good nite sleep at all ever since my exam started. No wonder my college mates kept commenting that I looked very stress up and tired. Hehehe.

Anyway, to be frank with u all, I’ve no idea what to write for my blog. Well, I think I will start with…I’ve been wondering lately…=)

I’ve been wondering lately…why is my love life so pathetic? I mean…it IS in a pathetic state. So like someone who has nth better to do, I examined what d heck is going on with my love life. =) And voila! I’ve come up with some conclusions. First, whenever I fell in love, the girl tend to be…TAKEN! It is so frustrating. When u find someone whom u think is d best, d greatest so far u have ever met and of course d most beautiful =P…she’s taken!! It just gets into my nerves sometimes but now…I’ve learn to accept it.

Secondly…girls…tend to perceive me wrongly. Ok. Maybe it is how I make myself to be perceive by others but…I still dont understand. Why didnt they make d effort to TRY to understand me? It still bothers me. And please I did make d effort to make myself to be understood and it somehow has backfired. Yes I know I can be boring at times. Maybe if they all empathize me instead of criticizing me or judge me.

Let me tell u all a little something about me…I am a traditional guy who has principles…yes! U heard me! Principles! Those are the laws that I will abide to. I only break some of them when deem necessary. However, d necessity has yet to come. i LOVE OLDIES. What’s d matter with that? Ok…for this part…it applies to all…not only girls. Sigh.

Ok. So maybe I AM complaining only becoz recently…I have fell in love with someone but…but…she’s in a relationship already. She’s someone that I felt to be….irreplaceable. Sigh. Plus when someone suggest I take advantage if her relationship is not…in a very good situation irks me. Where is d morals of d human being? Where is it?? I believe it has flew away…far far away. I know that in life…taking advantage is almost everything.

Oppurtunity doesnt comes easily…but to take advantage of someone…it’s like I am manipulating that person’s emotion at that time for my own gain. To tell that someone I love that her bf is bad and stuff like that is like I am cheating myself…coz i dont even know her bf! How can I pass judgement just like that? Who am I to do that even if she tells me her bf is bad…there must be a reason. But….I love her a lot and lately…I’ve been wondering whether I should let her go becoz my chances with her are extremely slim or there’s no chance at all. =(

Well…I am done for the day. Sigh. Well…time for me to go. Feedback are appreciated. Have a nice day. Ciao!