The thoughts of an amateur poet…me!!

Hi everybody.

Looks like I’ve got bitten by the poetic bug in the most unexpected times…I wrote this down quite a while ago actually…last month I think. Well anyway, here it is.

My Love

Would you dance with me, my love?

To waltzes or tango,

Under the starry night, with the full moon as our chandelier,

The green green grass as our dance floor,

And with nature herself and the starry skies as our audience,

Ah, I’d love to see your lovely smile,

Your eyes twinkling under the light of the stars and the full moon,

Addicted I am to it all and also the exquisite feeling,

Of holding you once again but this time to dance,

Would you not love it?

However, I have to ask you another question now,

What would you say to I love you?

I do indeed love you, it is no joke,

Your beauty caught my eyes,

Your personality interest me,

In the end, I fall for you my love,

I know your heart belongs to someone else,

Someone I can’t compete,

But this feeling for you I can’t deny, I can’t smother it,

And I need to know, though it may hurt me so,

Do you for a single moment,

Ever thought of me out of the blue?

For whenever I closed my eyes, I saw only you my love,

And when I open it, I longed to see you by my side,

Though I know there might not be a chance you would be with me,

At least dance with me, be with me for one day,

Then I can at least have the illusion,

The illusion of having you in my arms,

And I then could say that you had been mine, my love,

With the stars and moon as witness,

For a day.

Well, if you find it corny or sucky or cliched…anything negative.. don’t worry to voice it out…I feel the same way too. Lol!! I never had much confidence in anything I write…i know it could be further improved…guess i need to keep honing my skills… I hope you enjoyed it. Tata.

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